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Surviving by selling firewood in a small town of mainly jewellers, a homeless girl and her numerous  younger siblings struggle to save the day after a long snow storm interferes with their lifestyle. Cold and starving, the street children start getting sick. In a desperate attempt to save them, the homeless girl takes the last two coins they've got left and departs in the middle of the storm to find a legendary Wishing Well. She comes back with her miracle granted, which awakens the village's curiosity first, their greed later. But that's the least of her problems, they cannot take away the treasure from her, the actual curse is where does it come from. 
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First i would like to start with the good stuff. Love the teeth and the necklace, they are especially well done!

And now over to what i hope is received as constructive criticism. What i would recommend that you improve is her nose and the dirt. Her nose is very undefined, and looks a bit odd since the rest of the picture is so detailed. Same with the dirt. Try and vary the size and color a bit on the specs of dirt. You may even try to smudge some of it to get a more realistic feeling to it.